[wsas-java-dev] svn commit r459 - wsas/java/trunk/xdocs

[svn at wso2.com]

Author: marietta
Date: Tue Jan 16 22:31:36 2007
New Revision: 459

Modified:
   wsas/java/trunk/xdocs/installation_src.html
Log:
Reviewed.

Modified: wsas/java/trunk/xdocs/installation_src.html
==============================================================================
--- wsas/java/trunk/xdocs/installation_src.html	(original)
+++ wsas/java/trunk/xdocs/installation_src.html	Tue Jan 16 22:31:36 2007
@@ -14,19 +14,19 @@
 <h1>WSO2 Web Services Application Server for Java, @wso2wsas_version@ -
 Source Distribution</h1>
 
-<p>This page of the installation guide will explain how to build the WSO2
-WSAS for Java using the source distribution of the release.</p>
+<p>This page of the installation guide explains how to build the WSO2 WSAS
+for Java using the source distribution of the release.</p>
 <a id="intro"></a>
 
 <h2>Introduction</h2>
 
 <p>WSO2 WSAS for Java is available as a Standalone Edition and a Servlet
-Edition. In the other pages of the <a
-href="installationguide.html">Installation Guide</a> we have given
-instructions on the installation of these 2 editions.</p>
+Edition. (The other pages of the <a
+href="installationguide.html">Installation Guide</a> contain instructions on
+the installation of these two editions.)</p>
 
-<p>For the more adventurous users this release provides a source distribution
-so that they can build the WSO2 WSAS from source.</p>
+<p>For the more adventurous user, this release provides a source distribution
+so that they can build the WSO2 WSAS from the source.</p>
 
 <p><a
 href="http://dist.wso2.org/products/wsas/java/@wso2wsas_version@"><strong>Download</strong></a>
@@ -67,37 +67,37 @@
 <h3>Maven:</h3>
 
 <p>The WSO2 WSAS build is based on <a
-href="http://maven.apache.org/maven-1.x/">Maven</a>. Hence the prerequisites
-to build WSO2 WSAS from source distribution is to have Maven &amp; JDK
-installed. Extensive instruction guides are available at the Maven site.</p>
+href="http://maven.apache.org/maven-1.x/">Maven</a>. Hence, a prerequisite to
+build WSO2 WSAS from the source distribution is to have Maven and JDK
+installed. Extensive instructions are available on the Maven site.</p>
 
 <p>This guide however contains the easiest path for quick environment
-setting. Advanced users who wish to know more about Maven can visit <a
+setting. Advanced users who wish to know more about Maven can click <a
 href="http://maven.apache.org/start/index.html">here</a>.</p>
 <ul>
   <li>MS Windows</li>
 </ul>
 <ol>
   <li>Download and run the Windows installer package</li>
-  <li>Set the 'Environment Variables' ( create system variable MAVEN_HOME and
-    edit path. eg: "C:\Program Files\Apache Software Foundation\maven-1.0.2";
-    path %MAVEN_HOME%\bin)</li>
-  <li>Make sure that system variable <a
+  <li>Set the 'Environment Variables' (create the system variable MAVEN_HOME
+    and edit the path. e.g., "C:\Program Files\Apache Software
+    Foundation\maven-1.0.2"; path %MAVEN_HOME%\bin)</li>
+  <li>Make sure that the system variable <a
     href="setting-java-home.html">JAVA_HOME</a> is set to the location of
-    your JDK, eg. C:\Program Files\Java\jdk1.5.0_02</li>
-  <li>Run maven --version to verify that it is correctly installed.</li>
+    your JDK, e.g., C:\Program Files\Java\jdk1.5.0_02</li>
+  <li>Run Maven --version to verify that it is correctly installed.</li>
 </ol>
 <ul>
   <li>Unix based OS (Linux etc)</li>
 </ul>
 
 <p>The tar ball or the zip archive is the best option. Once the archive is
-downloaded expand it to a directory of choice and set the environment
+downloaded, expand it to a directory of choice and set the environment
 variable MAVEN_HOME and add MAVEN_HOME/bin to the path as well. More
-instructions for installing Maven in Unix based operating systems can be
+instructions on how to install Maven in Unix based operating systems can be
 found <a href="http://maven.apache.org/download.html">here</a>.</p>
 
-<p>Once Maven is properly installed you can start building WSO2 WSAS for
+<p>Once Maven is properly installed, you can start building the WSO2 WSAS for
 Java.</p>
 <a id="build"></a>
 
@@ -108,24 +108,25 @@
 distribution</a> is available as a zipped archive. All the necessary build
 scripts are included with the source distribution. Expand the source archive
 to a directory of your choice. You can run the following commands inside that
-directory to build WSO2 WSAS.</p>
+directory to build the WSO2 WSAS.</p>
 
-<p><strong>List of commands that can be run are as follows:</strong></p>
+<p><strong>The list of commands that can be run are as follows:</strong></p>
 
 <p>Note: The first time you run Maven it will automatically download the
-dependent jars. Therefore, first run will take more time.</p>
+dependent jars. Therefore, the first run will take more time.</p>
 
 <table border="1">
   <caption></caption>
   <tbody>
     <tr>
       <td><strong>Maven release</strong></td>
-      <td>To create the complete release artifacts including Standalone
+      <td>To create the complete release artifacts including the Standalone
         Edition, Servlet Edition, and source distributions.</td>
     </tr>
     <tr>
       <td><strong>Maven dist</strong></td>
-      <td>To create Standalone Edition and Servlet Edition distributions.</td>
+      <td>To create the Standalone Edition and Servlet Edition
+      distributions.</td>
     </tr>
     <tr>
       <td><strong>Maven jar</strong></td>